#258 of 365 – “a moment outside”

“a moment outside”

 

windows open

for my soul

to sneak

free

 

stealing splashes

with angels

and swims

in the sea

 

no walls

in the kingdom

no sand

in the air

 

no slums

on the bottom

of my own

disrepair

 

no slander

to pelt me

like daggers

of rain

 

just a moment

outside

of my tangled

domain

 

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About Blackbird

Poet, sculptor, writer, spouse, parent, crazy person - not necessarily in that order.
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6 Responses to #258 of 365 – “a moment outside”

  1. pi314chron says:

    YES!! Wonderful thumping rhythm, great images, and superb comparisons! Definitely RWE kinda stuff! LOL!

  2. sophiebowns says:

    This is fantastic- I want to read more!

  3. Starralee says:

    WOW. Wow, wow. “Tangled domain”–wow, that sure sums mine up!

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