#363 of 365 – 2 Haiku

2 Haiku

 

 

 

wading deep, so low

where even sorrow can’t go

joy hides in the blues

 

 

always a slow note

to reach right in and carry

my soul back to God

 

 

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Poet, sculptor, writer, spouse, parent, crazy person - not necessarily in that order.
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3 Responses to #363 of 365 – 2 Haiku

  1. pi314chron says:

    Ooops! I was in the middle of a comment to Haiku 1, which suddenly disappeared! Tricky old haiku. I’m going to say a couple of words on the MIA haiku anyway. Here goes — Stepping off into the unknown is the essence of FAITH. Without faith, everything is just arithmetic! Can you dig it?!

    Haiku 2 and 3 speak to the redemptive power of music to save us from ourselves and to lift us up when we wallow in self-pity.

    Or something like that!

    In any case, as the expression goes, regarding these two haiku, “It’s all good”!

    Ron

    • Blackbird says:

      Thanks Ron! Yes…I can dig it! I thought I got that tricky haiku out before anyone saw it…guess not. Oops! And glad you liked my little music haiku. 🙂

  2. pi314chron says:

    are you supposed to

    keep walking when you can’t

    see where you’re going?

    Answer: Yes! But beware the gangplanks!

    Ron

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